Assignment #11- Patterns of Error

Looking back at my last essay's I noticed that I make the same mistakes. One is that I over use the words also, and. I tend to use these words over and over, even though I know that I am doing it I still do not fix my mistakes. Another I do is that I do not make use of the the corrections that i get from others that look at my paper. I do not know why i don't but I tend to just rewrite my essay until i feel that it sounds right. Final thing i do is i do not organize my ideas right and this does affect my grading, but the patter that i use has been the way I write and I NEVER MAKE THE EFFORT TO CHANGE IT.

Assignment #9- A Choice in Topics

                   I have many goals that I would like to proceed for my education that I want to succeed in. One large goal that I up hold is that I want to be the first to graduate college out a family of five. I feel that I as the middle child with an older brother who dropped out of school should still the belief that my parents instilled in me. Growing up my family was semi poor, as a child I saw my parents struggled to get me all the things that I need. So this is why I want to complete college is so that I can do what my parents did for me and this why I follow this goal.   I know I am not the best of student and that I struggle but I do my best and I weather try then not try at all. Another goal that I wish to complete is finishing my generals and get a doctors in Physical Education and have a degree in art. I feel that I have been always in physical activates so I believe why not following it in a career. Another why wanted to fallow a career as an art teacher because I have always be interested in art and I been drawing for along while now. I feel that children today should be taught to open up their creativity and let it open it to a new world. My goal may be simple but my goals are my own and I feel that it something that I feel is valuable to me. Many may judge because I the way I am but who I am is the reason why I hold some many beliefs that I believe is right. 

Assignment #8- Thinking About Arguments

The argument that I wish to analysis is the legalization of weed.  Due to the fact by weed can be a substance that insures the growth of our economy. It would help lower the taxation on mostly all products that deal with our economy. Also by doing this it lower crime rate and bring a new income to all who use to this substance. Hemp would be welcome to the states and it would make a new type of fashion that would be used in the United States. Those who use this as an income would help those who have no income and bring a new type of stability to those who are in a financial struggle.

I chose this because many who I talked to have established a stance on this conversation. I know many who struggled who feel that if they used weed as an income and would help them in many ways. I have no interested in weed use but what I feel that has a lot of meaning to me is that it would lower crime levels a bit. In past situations I know those who got into situations that occurred due to mistaken identity over drugs. I feel that this is important to society and our government to look into every idea that helps improve our life style. I do not like the use of weed but if it can help I be for it, if it can be proven to improve.