Assignment #7- Reflecting on Progress Assignment #7- Reflecting on Progress

As I look back my writing has differ in some ways but any change is better than no change. I learned that to build a skyscraper you need a steady foundation, and what I learned is my foundation, my base to better writing. I know that I still may not be the best writer but when I feel that the topic at hand fits me I tend to exploded with ideas, and become more passionate with my writing.   There are many aspects that I can say that are helping me evolve into a better writer. I feel that I learning from your mistakes is the best to learn any issues that come to hand. Just as we wrote our literacy narrative, as I struggled writing this paper I can to learn a basic understanding of how to write one. I believe that my process has changed a bit but it’s may still is the same as before. I now do write my ideas down on paper and then connect all my ideas on paper. As time pass I can see myself grow to a successful writer and but nothing comes easy everything is a challenge.  Even though I did reactive the best grade I take as a learning experience. I feel this class can help still even though I might not be the best student and I do struggle, I’m willing to do my best and hope for it. But let my education be my path of leaving my name in history.

Assignment #6- Responding to Peers and Considering Rhetorical Situations

A literacy narrative is a type of writing that is written about a past story that is very detailed and well planed out. for example, my story about my dealing with a learning disability in school and overtime dealing with it; I described what i did to over come it. This paper was written in a informal writing form.
The advertisement paper is written in formal form and its is more about describing the message of the ad that is promotes. This paper is more focused on informing the stand that others take and how they wish to educate others. For example, my ad was of a little girl with a hallo of smoke and the a caption that said "children with parents that smoke, children go to haven early". The message is show that parents are selfish to the need os there children and how it shortens the life span of children. This is what i believe what the difference between a literacy narrative and the advertisement paper. 

Assignment #5- Analyzing an Advertisement

This ad is trying to portray that drinking Tropicana is healthy to drink, is good for an health family and with drinking this juice will help family come to aspect. I can that in this picture has a family together in which they are happy together and they are smiling and this portray that. The audience of this ad is mothers and small children.In the text it describes how its all natural and pure. In other ad's the advertisement is more coloring and family oriented, also in this picture the produced is colored but the family is in black and white it is to shows that having this product will bring life to a family. the tone of this ad seems to give of a happy to tone to the ad. I believe that this tone is prefect for this product and they choose this because they want to promote that this is a good product to have and i believe if had a less colorful people would feed into it and show that this product is Dark and Bad, and no family whats something bad in there home. This does not portray a happy home, and the American Dream.

Assignment #4-Thinking Critically About Revisions

As I began writing my paper I place all my thoughts on paper for the first draft. After reading I felt that all my ideas did not correspond each other and was all over the place. After correcting my draft it became more structure, balanced, and connected.

Yes I made many corrections, and organized it to the point where my literacy narrative can be connected to the readers.

After revising my paper I notice that I correct many grammar errs that were it constantly coming to pass. Also I made many corrections on where I place a comma’s and fixing my run-on sentences.

As I was one of the guilds that help me revised my paper and another that was good help me was a family member that has skills when it comes to writing papers.

I feel that the strong parts of my essay are the middle parts of my essay that talks about growing in grammar school with a learning disability. The weak parts of the essay that I can say is the begging because I feel that it need to be more connected to the rest of the paragraphs and more descriptive.