Assignment #11- Patterns of Error

Looking back at my last essay's I noticed that I make the same mistakes. One is that I over use the words also, and. I tend to use these words over and over, even though I know that I am doing it I still do not fix my mistakes. Another I do is that I do not make use of the the corrections that i get from others that look at my paper. I do not know why i don't but I tend to just rewrite my essay until i feel that it sounds right. Final thing i do is i do not organize my ideas right and this does affect my grading, but the patter that i use has been the way I write and I NEVER MAKE THE EFFORT TO CHANGE IT.