As I began writing my paper I place all my thoughts on paper
for the first draft. After reading I felt that all my ideas did not correspond
each other and was all over the place. After correcting my draft it became more
structure, balanced, and connected.
Yes I made many corrections, and organized it to the point
where my literacy narrative can be connected to the readers.
After revising my paper I notice that I correct many grammar
errs that were it constantly coming to pass. Also I made many corrections on
where I place a comma’s and fixing my run-on sentences.
As I was one of the guilds that help me revised my paper and
another that was good help me was a family member that has skills when it comes
to writing papers.
I feel that the strong parts of my essay are the middle
parts of my essay that talks about growing in grammar school with a learning disability.
The weak parts of the essay that I can say is the begging because I feel that
it need to be more connected to the rest of the paragraphs and more descriptive.
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